Analysis of Bleeding Heart

Joe Strickland 1986 (Hobbysville, SC)



I whispered to her low,
A vow to ease her pain,
But behind those honeyed words,
Lurked a harsh, jagged truth.
I didn't bring her calming peace,
Just a warning, stark and raw.
For I bear a weighty ghost,
Of bygone, searing hurt,
Whose shadow stretches long and far,
Even in the day's brightest light.
The woe within me ferments,
A cancer that slowly grows,
Devouring my very essence,
Consuming love's warm glow.
I told her the truth, yes I did,
For I have learned the hard way,
There is no cure for a heart that bleeds,
No balm to wipe the tears away.  


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Poetic Form
Metre 110101 011101 101111 10111 11010101 1010101 1110101 11101 1110101 10001101 0101101 0101101 010011010 010111 11001111 1111011 111110111 11110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 554
Words 122
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 422
Words per stanza (avg) 104

About this poem

This poem is about how people who are hurt often times hurt other people without intending to

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Written on May 15, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on May 15, 2023

Modified by JoeStrickland on June 10, 2023

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Joe Strickland

I'm just a regular, blue collar, working stiff who took an interest in writing poetry many years ago but until recently I haven't had a desire to share any with anyone or pursue publication. I'm an unpublished fork lift operator by night, and a day drinker by choice. I can be followed on Twitter @JoeStricklandSC more…

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