Analysis of Asphyxiated



Give me fresh air
That no one's breathed in
To speak words beyond compare
Not to start from the end to begin

Find me new space
Preferably far and clear
Free of any trace
Where no one's been near

Hard to explain how I feel
Without sounding suffocated
My symptom seems unreal
Imagining, I'm asphyxiated


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF
Poetic Form Traditional rhyme
Quatrain 
Metre 1111 11110 1110101 111101101 1111 1000101 11101 11111 1101111 0110100 110101 010010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 302
Words 57
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 18

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Written on May 19, 2023

Submitted on May 19, 2023

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