Analysis of bday letter tp my luv
I remember when I first heard your voice, it sounded like beauty..
I remember when you first drove to media walked hels fast when you parked, we hugged like we haven't seen each other in years, you we're soft, smelled like roses & daisies...
one year is not enough to watch you grow old with beauty's want us to be the oldest blk couple to have ever lived a life together with smiles and struggle but always love to share and give.
I have never met a beauty lovely,& strong woman like you that can keep me on my toes & goals.
I don't think no one or anything that can brake our bond..
you are my queen & you are my queen,
we share princes & princesses..
our love and family will 4ever be strong..
you took my shit & I took yours and we are 4ever still in love.
GOD has made us 4 one another...
this life time and forever I will be yours till my last breath.
we have had hard times and still got overawe have had good times and will have 4ever more I can't see myself with out you, you make my heart beat, you make my feet move.
you sleep like an angel, you sound like a mermaid singing in the deep blue sea, you feel like my first soft teddy bear when I was scared at nights get to hold you and know everything is gonna be okay..
I always dreamed of you but never had no pictures till now, but I didn't know it would always be sunny day & shinny knights.
today is your birthday you're not gaining age you're gaining beauty..
I LOVE YOU..
SHAREESE SMITH NAPOLEON
HAPPY BIRTHDAY...
Scheme | AXXXXXXXXXXXBXA XXB |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1010111111110110 101011111100111111111110111001111111010 111101111111111110101101110101010110101111101 11101010101101111111111 11111110111101 11111111 1110100 101010011011 111111101110101 11111010 111001011111111 111110111111101110111111111111111111 1111101110110001111111111011111111111011011011 1111111011101111101111110111 011111110111010 111 110100 101 |
Characters | 1,484 |
Words | 310 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 15, 3 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 63 |
Words per line (avg) | 16 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 567 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 146 |
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