Analysis of Boat on the Ocean



I am a boat on the ocean,
Stuck on the waves of life without a location.
Broken compass, broken sails
Being laughed at by the whales.
The storm beats me everyday,
I can live but only if I find my way.
How do I navigate out of this storm?
I feel so weak, I feel so worn.
The waves make me sick; up, down, up, down,
Might be better to let myself drown.
Oh! Look! Land in the distance!
Oh…It’s a mirage, the water mockingly glistens.
I am a boat on the ocean,
I need help but I have no flare gun.
Broken compass, Broken sails,
My skin is torn from splinters and nails.
I keep sinking…sinking…sinking…
But I can’t help thinking…thinking…thinking…
How could I have prevented this?


Scheme AaBbccdeffgbAaBbhhi
Poetic Form
Metre 11011010 110111010010 1010101 1011101 0111101 11111011111 111101111 11111111 011111111 11101111 1110010 1100101011 11011010 111111111 1010101 11111101 11101010 1111101010 11110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 693
Words 143
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 513
Words per stanza (avg) 128

About this poem

The first poem I wrote when I really started to get into poetry. I was really depressed and looking for a way to relieve the stress. Here's to a new start.

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Written on December 14, 2022

Submitted by AnthonyVanNus on May 24, 2023

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