Analysis of Hot Again



Yep, the complaints have returned.
Days in the thirties
Centigrade.
Sweat tickles under the arms.
On the forehead and  upper lip.
Women pat themselves
With talc, tsk, tsk.

The workmen around
That big street hole
Flaunt their orange
Safety wear
And bronzed torsos.
Setting up safety rails
And conduit augers
For laying in pipe.

Two nine year old
Boys get as close
As possible
Swaggering in imitation
Admiring all the equipment.
And desiring only
Twenty minutes to play
MAKE IT HAPPEN, MEN.

Victoria Park setting up
For a Cultural Festival.
Music podiums.
Food Concessions.
Acrobats, jugglers in their open spaces.
Eager busking musicians.
Lots of cold water Dispensers.
Games of Chance.
Extra garbage containers.
Cash only Folks.

A copper in parked cruiser
Only chuckles.
He knows that the irritating heat
Will bring out some strange
Episodes.
Bracing himself.
AC turned to High.
And dash intercom
Announcing a knife street fight.
Down in Preston.
Three cruisers needed.


Scheme XXXXXXX XXXXXXAX XXBCXXXX XBXDXDAXAX XXXXXXXXXCX
Poetic Form
Metre 1001101 10010 10 1101001 10100101 10101 1111 01001 1111 1110 101 011 101101 010010 11001 1111 1111 1100 1000010 01010010 0010010 101011 11101 01001101 10100100 10100 1010 10100011010 101010 11110010 111 1010010 1101 0100110 1010 11101001 11111 10 1001 11111 0110 0100111 1010 11010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 978
Words 189
Sentences 25
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 8, 8, 10, 11
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 157
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Written on June 01, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on June 01, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on June 01, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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