Analysis of There’s a Friend who…



There’s a Friend who
Did me much good
His wife as well.
Both on disability.
Lay ministry in the past.
Storefront Church. Downtown.
Mostly the attendees had
Mental issues and grievous
Emotional needs.

Our two friends sparkled
With evangelical zeal
Song, dance, art, meals
Bible readings round the circle.
I watched literal
Transformations.
God’s Word made
For some wonderful fruit (Galatians 5)
Gave out a couple of sermons.

That effort folded
Few years back.
My friends chose
Roman Catholic affiliation.
And argued about the switch.
(His Dad had been
A Methodist pastor.
His Nephew now a Pentecostal leader .)
My friend demonstrated much
Intellectual pride.
Smerked as he gave his reasons.
Almost begging for dispute.
Haven’t we all stumbled
Over the same?

But it got to the point
That I severed all connection.
And that without recourse.
I guess they can have
Mary and the saints
And the exalted Pope’s high throne
And nuncios.

Folks we have a Trinity
And not a quadrinity (the Virgin).
Sadly the writer Paulo Cuelho
Endorses this error.
Has a huge readership.
(By the River Piedra
We sat down and Wept.)
No one can afford the Distraction.
The side-eddy from the
Mainstream.

Note to readers…Equitable AIDA does not like this poem. She is totally into Syncretism. Too bad.


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Poetic Form Etheree  (36%)
Tetractys  (26%)
Metre 1011 1111 1111 110100 1100001 1111 1000111 1010010 01001 101110 101001 1111 10101010 11100 010 111 1110011 11010110 11010 111 111 10100010 0100101 1111 010010 1101001010 111001 01001 1111110 110101 11110 1001 111101 11101010 010110 11111 10001 00010111 01 1110100 0101010 10010101 010110 10110 101010 11101 111010010 011010 1 111010000101111101110001111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,291
Words 246
Sentences 30
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 9, 9, 14, 7, 10, 1
Lines Amount 50
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Written on June 02, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on June 02, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on June 02, 2023

1:13 min read
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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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