Analysis of Beach Song



It’s a note in a bottle
That brushes ashore
When the the Sun kisses the sea
And the Umbrellas and Towels are no more

When my time comes to sing
My lungs fill with salt
There’s a tune i want to bring
But I can’t quite exalt

There’s a rough chunk of sand
I hold in my hand
Every color
Every emotion

Reach my hands to the sky
Watch every grain fly
As I listen to the ocean

There’s an ocean of dollars
That die to be seen
It is only in death
They are white and pristine

When my time comes to stand
I’m weighed down by the sand
Bags that tie around my back
And my shoulders and hands

There’s a soft chunk of sand
I hold in my hand
Fine and grated
One emotion

Reach my hands to the sky
Watch every grain fly
As I listen to the ocean

A fine line separates
The sky and the sea
The blue perpetuates
As the earth sings to me

Someday we’ll be gone
And the world will go on
Every rock must return to the shore

The blue green tide will go in
And the green blue tide will go out
But will never be the same as before

There’s a small grain of sand
I hold in my hand
It’s special
It’s one for me

Reach my hands to the sky
Watch this lonely grain fly
As I listen to the sea


Scheme abcb dede fFxg HHG xixi ffxx fFxg HHG jcjc xxb xxb fFac Hhc
Poetic Form
Metre 1010010 11001 10011001 00010010111 111111 11111 1011111 111101 101111 11011 10010 100010 111101 110011 11101010 1110110 11111 111001 111010 111111 111101 1110111 011001 101111 11011 1010 1010 111101 110011 11101010 01110 01001 01010 101111 1111 001111 1001101101 0111110 00111111 1110101101 101111 11011 110 1111 111101 111011 1110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,193
Words 261
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 3, 4, 3, 3, 4, 3
Lines Amount 47
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 69
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Written on May 10, 2023

Submitted by kieranoel7 on May 24, 2023

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Kiera Kwiatkowski

I am 14 years old and graduating eighth grade. I will be attending an all girls private highschool and poetry is one of my biggest passions. more…

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