Analysis of Epiphany



I remember walking in the forest
Between the twigs and under the trees,
Behind the trunks and under the leaves,
I remember seeing tiny treats.

I remembered walking through the forest:
The trees swayed in the gentle breeze,
I stumbled down the greasy twigs,
I remember the Sun like almighty oak standing tall in the sky.
When I with glitching eyes, find myself sweating  in
 a traffic jam.

I could remember the grass as tall as the sky,
While I saw a field of roses nearby,
They scented like a perfume factory nearby.

I remember the trees with loaded jackfruit,
I remember them tasting like factory-made juice of fruits.
Were they with a similar smell of rich-scented watery fresh ripe fruits?

Why is this epiphany of natural flora?
Why do we first feel the factory product and not the farm produce?
I thought while I was walking into the city looking like a concrete forest,
Again and again, until it all came to an end.


Scheme ABXX ABXCXX CCC ADD XXAX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010100010 010101001 010101001 101010101 1010101010 01100101 11010101 10100110101101001 1111111100 0101 110100111101 1110111011 110100110011 1010011101 101011011001111 011010011110100111 1110100110010 11111010010010101 11111100101010100110 0100101111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 969
Words 191
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 146
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

this poem is about me remembering the time I went to a forest .

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Written on May 16, 2023

Submitted by shaileeheli on May 16, 2023

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