Analysis of Flooded, Dumb, Stuck, & Numb

Trevor Logan 1986 (CA)



I’m stuck, numb
      no thoughts come along
absently interested in and
sickened by the emptiness
     Frustrated Sedated Depressed
with no releases left, distractions fracture the past
   I sit next to the mess
Misdirected
    slipping into synaptic gaps
that disconnect my cognitive map

I’m flooded, dumb
  with a bloodied tongue
slowly awakened, mistaken
         by sensations of self-induced
                 secluded confusion
     Misplaced information blackens the sun

I’m flooded, dumb, stuck, & numb


Scheme AXXXXXXXXX AXBXBB A
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11101 110000 1010100 1001001 1101010101001 111101 0010 100111 100111001 1101 10101 10010010 10101101 010010 010101001 110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 527
Words 71
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 6, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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Describing the oncoming and aftermath of a grand-mal seizure.

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Trevor Logan

Trevor Logan is a quiet poet who enjoys wildlife and gardening. He struggles with drug-resistant temporal-lobe epilepsy, which is a major influence on his writing as it causes hypergraphia (an almost uncontrollable urge to write). His poetry can be found on Instagram @AnEpilepticsPoetics https://instagram.com/anepilepticspoetics?igshid=ZDdkNTZiNTM= more…

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