Analysis of God Shook His Head Today



In the public eye you spew lies from the tablecloth, with fake humanitarianism.

A sort of façade one puts on at a Mardi gras parade, whimsical and alluring.

Yet, your goodwill proves shallow.
Another ego centric politician to add to the list.

While the oceans dry up, and the glaciers melt, our super typhoons are angrily bellowing out rubbage from the plastics filling the earth.

Nobody really cares, in a world in which life is taken for granted.

Some countries go without electricity, and Wi-Fi as we sit down with a big mac, and whoppers.

Digging around in a cereal box trying to locate the little plastic toy.

Oh boy what have we done, to our planet? I assure you it is time to panic.

God shook his head today, wondering how we allowed the wasting away.

God shook his head today, surveying the land.
Crying as the clouds formed a frown.

I’m ranting like a tsunami killing innocents upon the shore, engulfing the victims with the force of five hundred armies.

It is too late, what’s done is done, landslides, and hurricanes the size of multiple states taking the weak to grow stronger, while others are left in defeat.

God shook his head today, then placed his face in the palm of his hands as he looked downward at the plastic filled sands.

Copyright © Jayme Chapin | Year Posted 2021


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Characters 1,310
Words 260
Sentences 17
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 64
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

Written by the eyes of the beholder noticing decades, and decades of observational insight into the corruption of the world. I enjoy writing and wish to publish a poetry book or perhaps start out with a chapbook. This particular poem allows one to think about environmental hazards, and what we take for granted. Perhaps, every world citizen attributes to some sort of environmental hazard whether one means to or not.

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Submitted by jaymecaroline on May 25, 2023

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Jayme Caroline Chapin

I am in my late forties and a native Texas citizen, with two amazing young adult sons. One serves in the US Navy and the other plans on joining the Air-Force. I enjoy writing short stories, full feature screenplays, tv character bibles, tv back pilots, and of course poetry. Furthermore, I work on and off as an IT recruiter, Business Development executive, and career coach. The Indian Paintbrush, Bluebonnets, caverns, hiking trails, lakes, and granite rock quarries are worth the trip. (Quite a sight to see) Similar to Australia but missing the Kangaroos of course. I will say when it comes to Texas politics and the wild west the mentality is a bit of a far reach for most. Many that reside here end up tolerating it because we have to. Whether you are pro-oil and gas or pro solar in the end we all have to get along and attempt to save our planet from overall destruction. In Texas we enjoy our evening sun sets, cactus blossoms, bougainvillea's, birds of paradise, crepe myrtles, Indian Paintbrush bluebonnets and of course shooting starts that light up the sky. I may live for another twenty, thirty years of die in two one never knows but the journey is what matters. Life is short so never forget that. ~~ God Bless- Texas more…

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