Analysis of I dream about you



I dream about you each and everyday,
Hoping to see us together one day.
It’s hard to see you with someone else ,
I just can’t help how i feel about us.
I guess i have to face the fact, that we will never together
And that’s just how it’s going to be .
I don’t really know what went wrong, its like you
Just up and stop talking to me with no explanation.
I tried to reach out to you time and time again,
All you can say is. That we can just be friends,
And that’s all we’ll ever be.
Because you say the age difference is still a big deal to you.
I don’t understand i thought you loved me,
But i guess not because you left me and broke my heart in two pieces.
Basically not how caring how you mean to me,
I use to winder what did i do wrong to make you leave me.
I guess i have to learn from my mistakes, to never trust a nigga of what he might say.
I been through it all,  I guess i learned not to fall so hard .
I never gave my heart to anyone before,
But i guess i gave it to someone that doesn’t deserve it at all.
I hope and pray  that one day someone will love me the right way and make me feel complete


Scheme AABCDEFGHIEFEJEEAKLMN
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110101 1011101011 11111111 1111111011 1111110111110010 011111011 11101111111 1101101111010 111111110101 11111111111 0111101 0111011001101111 110111111 11110111101110110 100111011111 111101111111111 111111110111010111111 11111111111111 11011111001 111111111101111 11011111111011011101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,129
Words 253
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 838
Words per stanza (avg) 238

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This poem is dedicated to someone i loved dearly

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Written on July 08, 2009

Submitted by RocsiHenderson on May 08, 2023

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Brittany Schultz

I lived in Milwaukee my whole life my passion is writing poems and taking care my kids im about to be moving to Abilene Texas i enjoy spending time with my lil family created more…

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