Analysis of One more Story



One More Story

One more story, one more day,
another smile to soothe a weeping
heart.

With another glance across the way,
another story, a simple hello to
a stranger passing by.

A kiss for the little ones, a hug
of love before the sandman comes,
a prayer of thanks for blessings
adorn from the heart.

Another day, painted in colorful hues,
a miracle sweeping away with the breeze,
a blanket filled with a sparkle in the darkness,
a night of misty bliss lingering by.

One more story, one more smile to give,
another handshake for a day well spent,
another day of growth, another lesson learned,
a heart filled with love along the path of
uncertainty.

One more story from the history books,
a what used to be, that is not today, a new
world approaching the landscape of tomorrow
and dreams of a promise well kept.

A new love entering a heartbroken dream,
a pressed rose of beauty in the summer
time of youth, another story of what was
and what could have been?

A special song, bringing memories floating
across thundering clouds, casting rainbows
after each refreshing rain.

Another story told about the past, today,
and maybe tomorrow the present, will
bring a glow flowing through each ray
of sunlight.

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Scheme A BCD BEF XXXD XXXF XXXXA XEXX XXXX CXX BXBX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 1110111 010111010 1 101010101 01010010011 010101 011010101 1101011 0111110 01101 01011001001 01001001101 010110100010 0111011001 111011111 010110111 010111010101 0111101011 0100 1110101001 011111110101 101001101 01101011 0111000101 0111100010 11101010111 01111 01011010010 011001101 1010101 010101010101 010010101 10110111 11 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,405
Words 251
Sentences 10
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 3, 4, 1
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

About the promises of living if we think positive enough to let love flow by in ease.

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Written on May 16, 2023

Submitted by harrietshea on May 16, 2023

1:15 min read
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Harriet A Shea

Poet of love and wisdom. A storyteller..Been writing poetry since my stroke in 2006. Use to write children's stories when my six children were young. more…

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