Analysis of Save Us From the Dark

Charlie Shaffer 1959 (Chelsea Mass.)



I write this poem in the darkness of the night,
With pen in hand and by candlelight
As I look into flame,
I feel loneliness and fear
For if the flame should die,
I wonder will you still be here
Now if you choose to go,
Remember it only takes a spark
To get the flame to burn again,
And save us from the dark


Scheme AABCDEFGHG
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111100010101 11010110 111011 1110001 110111 11011111 111111 010110101 11011101 011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 309
Words 72
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 238
Words per stanza (avg) 65

About this poem

My girlfriend decided our timing was wrong , so we split up. I wrote this poem to let her know when she is ready we can rekindle our love and see it in a whole new light.

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Written on May 17, 2023

Submitted by Ceshafferjr on May 17, 2023

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