Analysis of The Lost Song



I spend my days drinking pots of coffee in my house in the forest
Trying to hear the music through the falling branches of desiccated trees.
In the night, the pitter-patter of field mice drown out the sound of you.
And so, I must find ways to convince myself that I am only dreaming.

I step outside onto the frosted grass
As the notes play on like a leur cast out to sea.
Suddenly, my stride is a smooth waltz.
Suddenly, the wonder of whether I am dreaming dissipates.
Suddenly,
I am with you.

Under the snowfall
You reveal to me why the notes blend like melted chocolate.
How the ground no longer feels so bitter.
Why I no longer recognize the forest I once knew so well.

Spinning under the silver moon to the melody of Your unforgettable symphony,
You have allowed me to see you like I had many years ago.
You are invisible, yet iridescent
Only being seen when undeniably heard.
A perfect angel
Leading me to the song of myself.


Scheme XXAX XBXXBA XXXX BXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111011100110010 1011010101010110001 0010110111110111 01111110111111010 1111100101 101111011111 100111011 100010110111010 100 1111 10010 10111101111010 1011101110 111101001011111 1010010110100110100100 1101111111110101 1101001010 10101101001 00110 10110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 937
Words 191
Sentences 13
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 4, 6
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 184
Words per stanza (avg) 44

About this poem

I imagine this poem was written to dance. - Virello

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Written on May 15, 2023

Submitted by virelloc on May 28, 2023

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