Analysis of Rain Ahead



Some dark foreboding clouds

Farmers say it’s dry

Do not see things

As those who scurry about

We have our parks

June events long planned

Picnics with those loved.

Potato salad, chips, sausages

Ready to go.

Baseball gear in the trunk

Kites perhaps, gaily coloured.

For air dancing.

But look above.

And now growling

Nothing’s the matter.


Scheme X X X X X X X X X X X A X A X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 110101 10111 1111 1111001 11101 10111 1111 01101100 1011 111001 1011010 1110 1101 0110 10010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 383
Words 84
Sentences 8
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 18
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Written on June 14, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on June 14, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on June 14, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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