Analysis of Unchanged Suspects



Remaining the same unchanged suspects.
Coming today to debate and argue,
Amongst themselves.
As to why their participation,
Has resulted in destruction.
After warned and repeatedly being told...
Minds attracted to other minds,
Noticeably dysfunctioned.
Together when creating chaos, conflicts...
Division and havoc,
They perceive the doing of this to be...
A proving to show their devotion and loyalty,
To the many who have followed to pledge...
Allegiance to a keeping of kept ignorance,
Wherever it is to support and endorse it.

'No one could possibly be born that stupid!'

'When a cake is homemade,
And baked that way.
Awaiting it ready to come from one oven.
Not too often,
Are the ingredients for that cake to bake.
Discovered by knocking on neighbors doors.
With time taken doing this,
Around one's entire neighborhood.
Hoping to find another way,
To bake what looks like a cake...
Without an oven heated to put it in.'

'What has any of that to do,
With being mentally dysfunctional.
And following along behind,
A destructive crowd?'

'One should already know,
The taste of violence can become addictive.
And the results of this kind of craving.
Can spoil one's appetite for life to live.
And the need to knock on doors,
To discover what one should already know?
Is a pointless effort to explain,
That useless endeavor to expect understood!
Like buying children guns.
To have them believe are toys?
Done to have their minds,
Indoctrinated to and wish the real thing!'

'Your point of view?
Is all over the place and everywhere else.'

'This I know.
And where do you think,
Your issues started your troubles to begin...
As if to rise overheated from nowhere?'


Scheme XAXBBCDCXXEEXXX X XFBBGHXIFGJ AXXX KXLXHKXIXXDL AX KXJX
Poetic Form
Metre 010010101 1001101010 0101 11110010 10100010 10100100101 10101101 10001 01010101001 010010 1010101111 0101110100100 1010111011 010101011100 010111010011 11110011110 101111 0111 010110111110 1110 10010011111 0101101101 1110101 01101010 10110101 1111101 01110101110 11101111 1101000100 01000101 00101 110101 011100101010 0001111110 111101111 0011111 10101110101 101010101 11001010101 110101 1110111 11111 0100101011 1111 1110010101 111 01111 11010110101 111110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,667
Words 335
Sentences 33
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 15, 1, 11, 4, 12, 2, 4
Lines Amount 49
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 187
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Written on June 18, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on June 18, 2023

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