Analysis of Among the stars

Quinlan Grant 2011 (Madison, MS)



Glistening with light,
Oh! So beautiful and bright.
You fill up the night sky, and look so pretty as I walk by.
But never in the dark, with no light.

I will spend as many days,
As long as I can stargaze.
There are red, yellow, or white! Just like a moon pie, that I can bite.
They say “How long will it take, when it comes to days?”

Oh, I couldn’t bare,
To live without this nighttime air.
Yes, my thoughts intertwine, but I love how the stars shine.
I have such an imagination, it’s easy to bare.


Scheme AAXA BBAB CCXC
Poetic Form
Metre 10011 1110001 111011011101111 110001111 1111101 111111 1111011110111111 111111111111 1111 1101111 1110011111011 1111001011011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 507
Words 112
Sentences 11
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

This poem is about someone who loves the stars above them, and have such an imagination.

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Written on June 18, 2023

Submitted by quinlan.grant on June 18, 2023

Modified by quinlan.grant on June 18, 2023

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Quinlan Grant

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