Analysis of Good bye to you old mom

Cynthia novotny 1984 (Wilmington de)



When I first brought you into this world
I didn’t have a clue what was going to happen
I was only a kid and couldn’t fight back
I couldn’t even protect myself  as I wanted

But there came a day real soon
You brought me into your home
You helped take care of me
You were an angel sent from above

I truly believe always when I think of you
That you did try your best always
I never asked you to be perfect
But you truly were special to me

I’m really going to miss you
I also really wanted to say thank you
For everything that you have done
But one thing for sure I would of loved

I really never really got a chance
I wanna say good bye to you
That you will always be remembered
In my heart and in my soul forever


Scheme XAXX XXBX CXXB CCAX XCXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Metre 111110111 111011110110 1110010111 11100111110 1110111 1110111 111111 101101101 11001111111 1111111 110111101 111001011 11010111 11010101111 1101111 111111111 1101010101 11011111 11111010 0110011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 738
Words 168
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 30

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To someone I lost forever

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Written on June 19, 2023

Submitted by cynthianovotny6 on June 19, 2023

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Cynthia novotny

hi yes my name is Cynthia Novotny. I write all kinds of poems. Its a way to get out how I feel. There are all different kinds of poems. This is the first one I have written in a while. more…

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