Analysis of Beyond The Creating Of Fiction



This is beyond the creating of fiction.
With truth and reality purposely dismissed.
That in these days of conflicts and confusion.
People who are willfully deceived,
And allowing their way of life destroyed.
By one,
Who could less about anyone's loyalty given.
Shown and expressed.
Yet...
Continues to fraud and treason to commit.
With betrayal to perform it.
As their noses are pressed against evidence,
Produced.

And with this doing,
To still observe them standing...
Defiant in endorsing support.
Hypnotically overdosed and drugged.
By a duping that smothers,
The existence of truth and the reality of it.
Refusing they do to accept as it is.
That leaves nothing else close enough,
Presented.
Can or could snap them awake.
From a hold held tightly by one.
Who is clearly mentally out of control.

Although...
One who has 'their' minds mentally whipped.
Seem unable to distance themselves.
As if their addiction to end it,
Leaves them physically unprepared...
To detox without being reminded,
Their pledge of allegiance...
Had not been to a country.
But to a pusher promising to keep them fixed.
Regardless if this kept delusion to fiction it,
Crushes them all under a bus.
Driven by one anId only one pledged to trust.
Witnessed, observed and agreeing seen,
Behind the wheel of that very bus...
Known to cheat, lie, deceive corrupt and fraud.
Yet they remain disbelieving,


Scheme AXAXXAAXXBBCX DDXXXBXXEXAX XXXBXECXXBFXXFXD
Poetic Form
Metre 11010010110 1101010001 10111010010 101110001 0010111101 11 111011010010 1001 1 01011010101 10101011 11101101100 01 01110 1101110 010001001 11001 101110 001011001011 01011101111 11101101 010 1111101 10111011 11101001101 1 111111001 101011001 111010111 11100001 110110010 111010 1111010 110101001111 0101110101101 10111001 10111101111 100100101 010111101 1111010101 11010010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,376
Words 269
Sentences 31
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 13, 12, 16
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 363
Words per stanza (avg) 76
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Written on June 20, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on June 20, 2023

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