Analysis of Chronic Pain
Joe Strickland 1986 (Hobbysville, SC)
Dropped like a strand of silver,
My body's anthem
Twisted into knots,
Chronic pain,
An unwelcome tenant.
I am a field,
Shattered by my own roots,
Digging deep,
Burrowing into marrow,
Each ache a testament of fragility.
In the realm of blood,
Cells wage a battle,
A symphony of tears
And burning nerves,
My body,
A delicate instrument,
Ravaged.
Nights drift in,
A lonely lullaby,
Pain the merciless conductor,
Orchestrating,
The score of sleep
Etched with never-ending ache.
I paint a smile
On this broken canvas,
An offering to those
Who cannot see,
An invisible burden
Stitched within my bones.
My skin weaves memories,
A tapestry of torment,
Tender moments dulled
By throbbing reminders,
Chronic pain,
The cruel master of my days.
But hold me, dear world,
In your tender gaze,
For within every line
Etched upon my face,
Is resilience's quiet
Consolation.
Scheme | axxBc xxdxe xxxxecx xxaxdx xxxefx xxxxBg xgxxxf |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101110 11010 10011 101 101010 1101 101111 101 1000110 11010010100 00111 11010 010011 0101 110 0100100 10 110 01010 10100010 100 0111 1110101 1101 111010 110011 1101 1010010 10111 111100 010011 10101 110010 101 01010111 11111 01101 1011001 10111 1110 010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 884 |
Words | 190 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 5, 7, 6, 6, 6, 6 |
Lines Amount | 41 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 3 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 97 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 20 |
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Written on June 28, 2023
Submitted by JoeStrickland on June 28, 2023
Modified by JoeStrickland on August 28, 2023
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