Analysis of Stranded was Selkirk



A castaway
And hope stretched thin
The storm, the wreck, the digging in
Two shipmates lost
Their hearts broke first
The loneliness, the chill and thirst.
The gulls would teach
One errant mind
To dig the clams
And seaweed find.

The bonfires stoked
The night stars dreamed
Mid hopelessness
The touch of God
It seemed.
To not let go.
To curb the tongue.
To write rich memory
Of days when young.

And scan that line, yes
Friend, in each spent day.
To persevere and plant and pray.
Yes pray to God
Who oft brings light
And rescue, health
And end to Night.

(Could be Robinson Crusoe, or Alexander Selkirk or Tom Hanks with Wilson…or ENOCH ARDEN.)


Scheme ABBXCCXDXD XEXFEXGXG XAAFHXH X
Poetic Form
Metre 010 0111 01010100 111 1111 01000101 0111 1101 1101 011 0101 0111 1100 0111 11 1111 1101 111100 1111 01111 10111 10010101 1111 1111 0101 0111 111001010101011111011010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 650
Words 135
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 10, 9, 7, 1
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on June 29, 2021

Submitted by dougb.19255 on June 29, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on June 29, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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