Analysis of Gray



The day. Phone rings.
You’re gone.
Hit my knees. Cries. No words except no.
Waves of grief. A tsunami.
How could you leave me.
World spins. Dreams terrorize me.
You talk to me in them. Then reality.
Life continues for me. Beautiful moments happen except not quite as beautiful now. Stained glass with every third piece being gray.
Moments. Your grandchildren, their blood is yours and mine is yours. So many moments. Minutes into hours and hours into days. Life isn’t the same. Still beautiful but the gray is always there.  Lurking. Waiting to take over. For a moment. An hour. A day. Some days the tsunami overtakes me and some days I crave it and some days I hide. Fight it back. Never normal now. You took part of the beauty of life with you. And I am here. Living.  With the gray.


Scheme ABCDDDDEE
Poetic Form Nonet (22%)
Metre 0111 11 111111011 1110010 11111 111101 111101110 101011100101001111100111110011101 1011011110111110101001100100111101110010111110101110101011001110010101011111011111111010111110101111011110101
Characters 804
Words 154
Sentences 35
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 67
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 603
Words per stanza (avg) 146

About this poem

My mother died 10 years ago. As that anniversary approached I wrote this.

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Written on June 12, 2023

Submitted by Cbgravely201516 on June 13, 2023

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Corie Stewart

I’m a nurse, a wife, and a mother. I live in WV with my husband and two cats. more…

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