Analysis of Having many Friends may not be Reality



I'm tired of being lonely,

Even though I have many friends only,

They're just there to chit-chat and pass time,

Not realizing the loneliness that's mine.

I smile and laugh, playing my part,

Though inside me, I'm breaking apart.

I need a friend who'll hear my heart's cry,

And not just put up a superficial lie.

Don't get me wrong, my friends are great,

But there's a hole in my heart that won't abate.

I long for someone who'll understand,

And hold my hand, as we walk hand in hand.

I know I may seem cheerful and bright,

But that's just a facade, and not what's right.

I'm tired of being lonely, you see,

Please come and rescue me.

-         Ayn Asif


Scheme A A X X B B C C D D E E F F A A X
Poetic Form
Metre 11011010 1011110110 111111011 1100010011 11011011 101111001 110111111 0111100101 11111111 11010111101 1111101 0111111101 111111001 1110010111 1101101011 110101 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 687
Words 160
Sentences 8
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 29
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

You may feel you have friends when you go out with them, but somewhere at the back of your mind, you know it's not real

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Submitted by dr_dianakhalid on June 25, 2023

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Ayn Asif

Ayn is studying in 10th grade and has been writing poems since 12 years old and is currently working on her novel. more…

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