Analysis of Parking in Dawning’s Peace and Quiet



Sitting in Walmart

Rising Sun alerts

Crows clean up

One Staffer here

Dropped off early

Curbside chain smoking

We have said nothing

To this point

Sharing cool and quiet

An odd brotherhood

Couple of cars

Telling the story

Of Saturday night’s

Or rather the

Or Floor Polisher

Or dry grocery

Night Crew setting up

Aisle by aisle.

This is Life

And likely Errands.

Starting in this Lot.

My harmonica pulled out

Bird senses a competition.

Distant traffic sounds

Muflled until inconsequential.

One Mourning Dove

Beneath an asphalt island tree

Refusing to relinquish

And the Glow.

I get it, and

wish for the same.


Scheme X X A B C D D X X X X C X X B C A X X X X X X X X X C X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1001 10101 111 1101 1110 1110 11110 111 101010 1110 1011 10010 11001 1100 111 11100 11101 111 111 01010 10011 1010011 1100010 10101 1010010 1101 0111101 0101010 001 1110 1101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 818
Words 182
Sentences 10
Stanzas 31
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 16
Words per stanza (avg) 3
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Written on July 09, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on July 09, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on July 09, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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