Analysis of The End Of Youth



The mark of age tattooed
On our skins,
Pockmarked reminders
Of battles fought
On desperate bed sheets.

Unfolding scars
Like chapters from a book,
Each line a memory
Etched deep.

Lipstick smeared
Across the collarbone
Like blood
On a hunting knife.

Youth's tender curve
In the rearview mirror,
A distant flicker
Fading fast.

The taste of adrenaline still lingers
Between parted thighs,
As innocence was ravished
By time's cruel touch.

Now bones creak
With every step,
Echoing the symphony
Of youth's demise.

And in shadows we find peace,
Embracing the darkness
That dances like a lover
At life's final masquerade.


Scheme AXBXX XXCX XXXX XDDX BEAX XXCE XXDX
Poetic Form
Metre 011101 1101 1010 1101 11011 0101 110101 110100 11 11 01010 11 10101 1101 001010 01010 101 0110100110 01101 110011 11101 111 11001 1000100 1101 001111 010010 1101010 111001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 618
Words 118
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Written on July 15, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on July 15, 2023

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Joe Strickland

Writer from South Carolina. Recently signed first publishing contract and is waiting for release date of first collection of poetry. I've never written a poem while completely sober. You can follow me on Twitter/X @JoeStricklandAU more…

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