Analysis of An unlikely friend In my garden



In my garden,
I nurture it's growth.
I tend to the weeds,
I give it nutrients when
It receives a watering,
from myself & the rain.

The grass grows taller than I can mow.
I watch as the weeds settle in.
There are shrubs that have self seeded
and taken over my plants.
There is also an Ibis that visits my garden ..
I've named her 'Mim.' Some have called her ugly, not seeing her resilience.

My dog sleeps inside on his bed,
until he hears the back door open.
His reaction is to chase this ibis away.
Jealous, that I also talk to her,
the way I speak to him and that
she has a name,  & gets some food.

I tell my dog that he has no reason to chase her as I feed her sardines, bread soaked in milk, seasoning from a BBQ chicken.
Perhaps our bond developed when I realised she would bring her fledglings to my garden...like a 'bird nursery .'

Sometimes I see her on the apex of my roof, 'strutting her stuff' with a branch, from my recent pruning.  She is seeking a companion with the message 'Help me build a strong nest'
I refer to this as her Grecian Fertility Dance, to attract 'Big Daddy'...a regular visiting male Ibis.
I know the different markings on each of their necks..and thar the male has a larger bill

It appears that Mim has brought me the light of hope. She is a strong mother, her black eyes are not menacing . Her bill is for finding grubs & she sang to me once with a 'Yuup, yuup yup', when I served her cooked oats with butter & sardine oil as a winter treat. Her wing span is impressive when she opens them out for a  stretch in the sunlight.

Perhaps I lost the structure of this poem,
in creating this,
But I have found some light ,
once more, in me.


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Poetic Form
Metre 0110 11011 11101 1111001 1010100 1101 011101111 11101100 11111110 0101011 1110110110110 110111101011000100 11101111 011101110 101011111001 101110110 01111101 1101111 11111111101101110011101100101010 011010101111110111101100 011101011111001101111010111000101010111011 101111010010011011100100100110 110100101111110110101 1011111101111101100111110001111011111110111111011110011101010111010111011101001 01110101110 00101 111111 1101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,682
Words 357
Sentences 23
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 2, 3, 1, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 182
Words per stanza (avg) 47

About this poem

Represents my journey of five years of unemployment, and the depression that followed. The erosion of friendships and my relationship with an Ibis that kept me company.

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Written on July 13, 2023

Submitted by evelynsnow7 on July 12, 2023

1:47 min read
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Evelyn Heather Snow

Unemployed, alone, broke, depressed in South Lake WA. more…

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