Analysis of Child trauma

falin w 1992 (california)



they took my children away , accused me of things i would never do , without the proof but still my kids are gone , the days go on and more stuff piles on , makes things harder on us parents , so  that are children stay gone , say we abandoned are kids , put them through trauma ,how is this so when u took them based on how u  a non parent should raise a child ,the trauma with kids is that u rip them from there parents , take apart the bond alienate the family , plant words and phrases in there heads so my children think they were abandoned tell me u cant say they will be home soon , its empty words a empty promise, the system gives the children ptsd abandonment issues but parents are the problem ,


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how my life seems to have events happen as if i broke a mirror gave myself bad luck or just my mother gave it to me when i was born and having my kids taken away

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Written on July 12, 2023

Submitted by falin_w on July 12, 2023

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falin w

i went through the system the difference was my parents didn't want me they placed me there told them to come get ,me, i goy my kids taken away based on the fact cps gave me mental problems now they have my kids more…

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