Analysis of Its Smiled Knot



I walked into the woods, deep in nature's embrace
I stood before a pond reflecting my face
I smiled at the pond and my smile I did see
But the pond itself, smiled not back at me

I turned to my right and smiled at a tree
Its branches spread wide, but smiled not back at me
It was then I turned to smile at a crow
But in return, no smile did it show

So, I smiled at the swallows as they chased the gnats
Yet no smiles of theirs followed as they continued their dance
I smiled at the hawk as it soared in the sky
Its stoic expression reflected in my eye

I smiled at the beetle crawling on the grass
I smiled at the bee as it buzzed past
I smiled at the butterfly fluttering by
I smiled at the sun, the clouds, the sky

I smiled at the creek with its calm flowing water
I smiled at the frog, the fish, and the otter
I smiled at the ground and let out a sigh
For in all of these beings no smile could I find

So I returned to the pond to study my reflection
I smiled and smiled until I smiled with perfection
But there in the pond only myself could I see
The pond itself, smiled not back at me

Suddenly my smile turned to frown
I decided it was time to return to town
Confused I stood wondering why
I decided to give it one more try

I smiled at a tree but it smiled not back at me
With its branches spread wide, it stood silently
It’s roots tangled deep, strong, and proud
Expressing emotions so moving, profound

I turned to the crow who did not smile
But returned my gaze with its own expressive style
Perched upon the branch with wings spread wide
Revealing the feelings it never tried to hide

With whispered steps I then walked and listened
The whistling wind then taught me a lesson
Hellos were hidden in hums of wings
Emotions display differently in different beings

I smile at a rock, weathered and still
        It does not smile, emotions conceal
        In its silent stance, feelings reveal

I smile at a flower, colorful and bright
        No smile to offer, a beautiful sight
        With a sway in the wind, emotions alight

I smile at a frog, still and serene
        Calm upon its face, no smile seen
        Peacefulness, reflects in its sheen

I smile at the hawk, stoic and bold
        No smile returns, a sight to behold
        In the flap of its wings, a language untold

I smile at the sun, brilliant and majestic
        Without a smile, radiance eccentric
        Warm feelings, enthusiastic, emphatic

I smile at the sky, immense and vast
       Colors and clouds ever-changing, no smiles cast
        Its boundless expanse, forever enchants

I smile at a cloud
                I smile at the breeze
                I smile at a shadow
                I smile at the leaves
                I smile at a spider
                I smile at a bee
                I smile at a butterfly
                I smile at a centipede
                I smile at a snail
                I smile at a beetle
                I smile at a turtle
                I smile at a weasel
                I smile at a memory
                I smile at a dream
                I smile at a melody
                I smile at the stream
                I smile at a slug
                I smile at a worm
                I smile at everything
                With or without form
                I smile at the world
                With its diverse displays
                Expressing emotions
                In unique ways

I smile at the tree, branches spread wide
         It smiles not back, it does not hide
         Its smiled knot, smiling with pride

In moments when smiles may not find their way
Emotions still stir in their unique displays
With whispered steps we may seek to find
The smiled knot to which we once were blind


Scheme AABB BBCC XXDD XEDD FFDG HHBB IIDD BBJX KKLL XHMM XNN OOO PPP QQQ RRR EEA JXCXFBDXXSSSBTBTXXXXXUXU LLL XUGG
Poetic Form
Metre 110101101001 11010101011 11101011111 1010111111 1111101101 11011111111 1111111101 100111111 111101011101 11111101101011 11101111001 110010010011 11101010101 111011111 1110101001 111010101 111011111010 11101010010 1110101101 101111011111 11011011101010 110101111010 11001101111 010111111 10011111 11011110111 01111001 110111111 111011111111 11101111100 11101101 01001011001 111011111 101111110101 101011111 010010110111 1101111010 0101111010 10100111 01001100010010 111011001 111101001 011011001 11101010001 1111001001 10100101001 111011001 10111111 10001011 111011001 110101101 00111101001 11101100010 0101100010 1100010010 111010101 10011010111 110010101 11101 11101 11101 11101 111010 11101 111010 111010 11101 111010 111010 111010 1110100 11101 1110100 11101 11101 11101 11110 11011 11101 110101 010010 0011 111011011 11111111 1111011 0101111111 01011010101 110111111 011111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 3,811
Words 660
Sentences 1
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 24, 3, 4
Lines Amount 89
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

I believe that plants have feelings, humans are just unable to recognize them because they are not displayed as we do our own. This may act as metaphor for not being able to recognize feelings in other people because we each have our own unique way of displaying our feelings and our own unique way of feeling, just like plants and other animals do too.

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Submitted by Trevdowell on July 06, 2023

Modified by Trevdowell on August 11, 2023

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Trevor Logan

Trevor Logan is a quiet poet who enjoys wildlife and gardening. He struggles with drug-resistant temporal-lobe epilepsy, which is a major influence on his writing as it causes hypergraphia (an almost uncontrollable urge to write). His poetry can be found on Instagram @AnEpilepticsPoetics https://instagram.com/anepilepticspoetics?igshid=ZDdkNTZiNTM= more…

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