Analysis of Narcissus



There came to view a gleaming lake
Which beckoned him to take a drink,
But beauty seized the thirsty lad
As there he bent above its brink ...

A stunning sight appeared to him
Who marveled at its dear design—
Behold! a face beheld him back,
Whose symmetry was so divine.

How mesmerizing, oh the sight,
That rippled in the water clear ...
He touched his finger to its cheek,
But wavelets had it disappear.

When all the agitation calmed,
He dared, from love, a soft embrace:
But any touch attempted would
Disturb the beauty of its face.

Again it came. Again he touched.
Again the figure fluctuates.
Lamenting there beside that bank,
He cursed himself and all the Fates:

"What awful truth must I endure
That tells me what I see is I—
That boy within the water's gleam
Is me! Oh, wretched me! But why?"

Then Nemesis, who lingered by,
With fatal judgement in her vest,
Remorseless, cast a lethal lot
Which grew despairing in his breast.

Bereft of love's requited touch,
He pounded moans upon his chest
'Til writhing, by the water's edge,
He slipped into eternal rest.

His deathbed is a thing of woe—
   A cautionary tale to fear.
The Naiads and the Nymphs all know
   That self-love grows a flower there.


Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC XDXD XEXE XFXF FGXG XGXG HCHX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (89%)
Metre 11110101 11011101 11010101 11110111 01010111 11011101 0101111 11001101 1100101 11000101 11110111 111101 1100101 11110101 11010101 01010111 01110111 0101010 01010111 11010101 11011101 11111111 11010101 11110111 11001101 11010001 01010101 11010011 011111 11010111 11010101 11010101 1110111 0100111 0100111 11110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,231
Words 249
Sentences 16
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

I've always delighted in the tragic myth surrounding poor Echo and her self-complacent heart's desire, Narcissus. So many classic poems about the two, I thought I would try my own hand at one: beginning with Narcissus.

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Submitted by Vixility on July 16, 2023

Modified by Vixility on August 08, 2023

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John W. May

John W. May has lived in Colorado all his life. He currently works in the field of ophthalmology and loves to mountain bike and read about history. John first became a lover of poetry in 2008 after having read a poem by John Milton. He has been reading and studying the works of various poets since. His favorite poets are Emily Dickinson, Fyodor Tyutchev and W. B. Yeats. more…

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