Analysis of Open Book



I fear for the future;

There is so much effort needed in believing.

The bones of broken trust scream out in agony.

There goes another brother,

Lost to the seductive and toxic addiction to hate,

That sweet rage outlet causes false catharsis,

As another goes knocking on Her door,

Needs a couch to crash on

Because home is not the haven that was promised.

The streets smell like iron bars on high school windows,

The residents brace for impact

As a boar comes charging through their city.

Another day, another mark for the record.

People are in danger,

We see it every day,

For some in greater graphic detail than others.

People are harassed and threatened,

Voices set to silent by force,

Because somewhere up top,

As much as it may be dismissed,

It is known that stories and words are power.

A tale as old as time,

Where Change and Knowledge are burned at the stake

In the name of whatever covers expensive sooty tracks.

It’s over there, one might think,

Nimbys shaking their heads in pity;

One might sigh,

“I got mine.”

It’s so hard to cling to hope,

Hard to trust that we will fight for ourselves and carve out spaces.

I am so young and afraid,

Cynicism inherited from the fracking leaks into the river.

I drink its water with the privilege that we can afford it.

I can’t eat money,

Still, I beg for a means to get nourishment without being chased away.

Day in, day out,

Art I’ve been makin’,

Grant me some cheddar

So I can bring home the bacon.

I have been taught that knowledge is power and books are the vessel.

Thus, they line up to jump in the pile,

Another reality forbidden to be known,

Another story deemed unsavory.

I wear my mind, heart, and fire on my sleeves,

The stitches, so wonderfully wonky and sharp.

I’ve much to learn, and places I know will guard our tales,

Protect our riotous songs and angry pages.

I know not much,

But I am one with the names and people who burn

For the sake of the greed for power the higher authority craves.

Still, I am merely one banned open book

Laid upon the steps leading to a vast library.

The shelves adorned in wisdom and righteous rage,

Of literature that yells for action from every age.

Revolutions are riots in their infancy,

And I will happily hold aloft the shrieking little future in my arms

In hopes someday, it will grow up to become a movement

Instead of a retreat.


Scheme A X B A X X X X X X X B X A C X X X X X A X X X X B X X X D X A X B C X X A X X X X B X X X D X X X X B E E B X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 111110100010 011101110100 1101010 11001001001011 1111101010 1010110101 101111 011110101110 011110111110 01001101 1011101110 010101011001 101010 1111001 110101001110 10101010 10111011 01111 11111101 11111001110 011111 1101011101 00111010010101 1101111 11011010 111 111 1111111 1111111100101110 1111001 1000100101101010 111101010111011 11110 111101111000110101 1011 11110 11110 11111010 1111110110011010 111111001 01010100111 0101010100 11111010111 01011000101 11110101111101 0110100101010 1111 111110101011 10110111001001001 1111011101 101011010110 01010100101 110001111011001 01011001100 0111001010101010011 0111111101010 011001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,443
Words 548
Sentences 23
Stanzas 58
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 58
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 32
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

I wrote this poem in light of the recent hostile climate against queer and trans people in the United States, particularly on the long list of book bans radiating from Florida.

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Written on July 10, 2023

Submitted by AshOfRuins on July 10, 2023

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