Analysis of Searching For Some Minnows



I've fallen out of trees, I've fallen out of windows
Fell backwards down a waterfall searching for some minnows
I've fallen off of rooftops, fell feet first into a well
I've fallen up and down the stairs, don't ask and I won't tell
I seem not to fall as much when staying on solid ground
It's not that far to fall to and no airtime going down
There are times I have fallen repeatedly going into and out of
The most painful pain of all the pains as I fell in and out of love


Scheme AABBCDEE
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111101110 1101010101110 1101111110101 11010101110111 11111111101101 1111111011101 111111001001001011 01101110111100111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 477
Words 99
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 369
Words per stanza (avg) 95

About this poem

The title is the main reason I wrote this poem. I thought this has got to be the beginning of a great poem. I just started writing about all the times I have fallen.

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Written on July 11, 2023

Submitted by B.mathislange on July 11, 2023

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B.Mathislange

I'm one of 12 children raised on a 15 acre farm in a small town in Maryland. Lived all over the United States even Hawaii and settled in California. I was the first female forklift operator for American Honda when they were located in the city of Gardena. I changed the work place opening many doors once closed to the women working there.My mother was a writer as well. more…

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