Analysis of Wishing You Were Here

Stacey Branco 1982 (Honolulu)



I’ll never forget the day
I stood over you
Waiting for you to take a breathe
Wishing you would wake up,
Inside I’m begging and pleading
Please don’t leave me
I love you so much.
I can’t stop the pain inside
Why did you have to go?
Why did you have to go when
We needed you the most?


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJK
Poetic Form
Metre 1100101 11101 10111101 101111 01110010 1111 11111 1110101 111111 1111111 110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 293
Words 65
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 216
Words per stanza (avg) 59

About this poem

Wrote this poem when my Grandma passed away.

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Written on February 24, 2006

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