Analysis of A World Away

Charles Edward York 1966 (Saigon, Vietnam)



A World Away

The undiscovered country is a world away
Smoke and mirrors are transparent
Compared to my future
Tea leaves from tragic tales
Read like a mystery novel
And the tides of tomorrow
Appear gloomy at best
As waning waves
Wash me in tears.

Struggling to find work with a living wage
Crashes against the wall of denials
Rejection becomes regular fanfare
Applications are shot down
In a keyword filter
Riddling my desire
Into dilapidated desperation
It feels futile to ask
For a chance to just live.

I stroll down a street of broken dreams
Feeling alone until I see
The shattered smile of the jobless
Those who can’t afford food
Unable to pay bills and basic needs
Medicine stays on shelves
Instead of curing the sick
A better life is a world away
When a hand goes empty.

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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Scheme A AXBXXXXXX XXXXBBXXX XCXXXXXAC XB
Poetic Form Etheree  (27%)
Metre 0101 00101010101 10101010 011110 111101 11010010 001101 011011 1101 1101 10011110101 1001011010 010011001 010111 00110 11010 010100010 111011 101111 111011101 10010111 01011010 111011 0101110101 100111 0111001 010110101 101110 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,043
Words 192
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 9, 9, 9, 2
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 168
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

The futility of job searching

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Written on August 15, 2023

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on August 15, 2023

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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