Analysis of Unlikeliest of Lovers

Jamie Tierney 1991 (Cardiff)



In the land of magic and mystery, where spells abound,
A sorcerer met a maid so fair and small, with breasts so round.
He was taken by her beauty, her pure heart so true,
And knew he must possess her, no matter what he do.

She feared his power, his strength so great and vast,
Afraid he’d crush her, leave her broken at last.
Yet still, they found comfort in each others embrace,
Explored the secrets of the universe face to face.

In the depths of space, two hearts collide,
Passion burning bright, impossible to hide.
They yearned for each other, longed to be near,
Finally, their moment came clear.

Their bodies intertwined, a perfect fit,
As their aura’s blend, a cosmic hit.
Energy flows, electricity sparks,
Love consumes, takes no marks.

His lust grew fierce, her passion wild, they couldn’t hold back,
Their love consumed them, left them feeling lack.
Now they roam the stars, forever entwined,
Two souls joined, never to part again.

Stars dance around them, light up the night,
A union so pure, nothing feels quite right.
Together they go, through time and space,
Forever in this sweet place.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIXX JJDD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 00111001001101 010010111011111 1110101001111 0111010110111 11110111101 01110101011 111110011001 010101010111 001111101 10101010011 1111101111 10011011 1100010011 11110101 100101001 101111 111101011111 1101111101 1110101001 111101101 110111101 0101110111 010111101 0100111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,116
Words 221
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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