Analysis of Ugly Heart



Your ugly heart began your journey started,
On a path you determined...
Would destroy and upset,
Where and how I live.
You know nothing about.

I am no rumor to humor,
Lies told to amuse your lack of self esteem.
Or believe me to be the one perfect to use,
As a duped to fool player,
In a game to trick and treat to have it seem...
Others to believe the same as you do.

I don't know where you got your 'info' from.
Or knew you to be that dumb.
To welcome stupidity on your own to do done.
And yet I wish you only the best.
Since your ugliness to have is yours.
Needing no one else to confess or express,
That some who are told,
To keep heard to hear to themselves...
Can not wait to address,
The hope of being approved and accepted.
By...
Professional jerks once to have been morons.
And recently promoted idiots.
Who too have ugly hearts that are aging.

Although recruit they do to prove,
The popularity of wickedness and evil meant...
Is not a come to go passing fad!
Some wear this as if a badge of honor.
On their chest.
And...
As close to the heart as ugliness can get!


Scheme XABXX CDECDX FFXGXHXXHXXEXX XXXCGAB
Poetic Form
Metre 11010111010 1011010 101001 10111 111001 11110110 11101111101 101111010111 1011110 00111011111 1010101111 1111111101 1111111 1100100111111 011111001 111001111 10111101101 11111 11111101 11111 01110010010 1 0100111111 0100010100 1111011110 1011111 0010011000101 110111101 1111101110 111 0 11101110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,076
Words 244
Sentences 23
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 14, 7
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 204
Words per stanza (avg) 53
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Written on August 17, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on August 17, 2023

Modified by lpahtillah on August 17, 2023

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