Analysis of Nights with you
Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)
A warm embrace.
Passionate kisses placed,
Where a man cannot resist.
Thoughts vanish between us
As bodies hum then sing,
Our dance ensues
amidst the pleasure of the moment
As destiny awakens
an unseen distant calling
Swayed by subtle shifts in gravity
between planets
using calculus applied to our interactions
Lights a path we have no recourse, but follow
Then too, there’s you…
captivating eyes
which illuminate in dark surroundings
Pull at the core of my heart
ways i cannot ignore
Paired with the most heartfelt desire,
thus inclined i find myself falling in love with you.
Thoughts lit by candlelight and wine.
Speaking in an angelic voice.
You capture the moment.
Focus my attentions
by the most beautiful mind,
bringing meaning filled expressions
Bend space/time.
Seems, our dreams meet our memories.
Perfectly balanced
reaching through our souls.
Find our hearts, eager, able,
willing to explore
Souls tempered by trials
and the capacity to endure
What treasures we create
expressions purely of loving,
sentient beings
Which are
A calling from the unborn
To us
For assistance
in preparation to ride
On the next wave in the flow
To build further upon the foundation
Promise of the Creators wish
Feelings beyond words…
Carry weight of unborn generations
Just as surely as rains fall
Stir in thy womb
Mother of unfolding creation,
Feeling
an instantaneous connection
These nights with you
Alter my perception
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Scheme | X X X AB XC DB XXD E FXG X HX F X X CD XDX XXX XH XX XBG XXA XXE IX XDX XI BI F I X |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (27%) |
Metre | 0101 100101 1011001 110011 110111 10101 010101010 1100010 1011010 111010100 0110 1010001110010 10111110110 1111 1001 1010001010 1101111 111001 11011010 101111100111 1111001 1001101 110010 101010 1011001 10101010 111 1101110100 10010 101101 11011010 10101 110110 000100101 110101 01010110 110 11 0101011 11 1010 001011 1011001 1110010010 10100101 10011 101111010 1110111 1011 101010010 10 10100010 1111 101010 101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,613 |
Words | 318 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 29 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 3, 1, 3, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 2, 3, 3, 2, 2, 3, 3, 3, 2, 3, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 55 |
Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 41 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 8 |
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