Analysis of Drumbeat



inspiring those with  
Supernatural abilities,

speaks directly to hearts
with passion/creative diversity

bringing offset harmonies
and people together to a beat

Stepping into worlds
of visionaries bearing gifts  

At will opening
closing temporal rifts  

Of elemental progressions,
touching to depths ethereal

Making complex impressions

Touching soul and being intimately,  

Arousing feelings
between waking moments  

coming in and out of phase

speaking of ancestral dreams

each beat a natural means  

to …become fluent in timing
sensually climbing  

building walls of sound…

Fashioned by ancient technology,
designed with nature.

Material handpicked,
chosen carefully by craftsmen

engineering by manipulating interpretive sound.
To speak in rich, roaming streams of tones

Moving mountains, wings of sound with interwoven beats pounding rhythmically timed, sublime…

Practiced to perfection, drums which speak.  

Telling stories of heroes/sheroes made,
dues paid, love being made

Of Kings and Queens
living beyond castles and thrones…

Being Real people
relating naturally

living in our bones

Paired with living sounds
in the mosaic,
of memories replayed,

messages of love
relayed to our souls   

Being portrayed
as warning signs,

telling us do not continue to be
played for a fool, used as tools

to a trade/in undertones,
its song to carry us far, wide…

Talking drums
move people to leap into action
…dance.

Call people to war …if need be

Deliver the word faster than birds can fly.  

Hit hard by hands feet/expanding minds  

Hollow logs/animal skins stretched taut  

Speak love notes ways which can’t be taught

Steel drums, electronic instruments,  

Drumsticks and brushes, even balls and chains,  

Become part of the instrumentality
where hand falls on part of the drum,
aiming for that sweet spot

where how the drum is hit
connects which makes it… sizzle and pop!

Messengers of emotional keys
to spiritual realms

building blocks to pleasure,
pairing with vocal cries

Elevates moods… creating trance states
taking us to new dimensions

To rhythms leaping deliberately.

Bathed in echoes
mind/body/spirits

speaking live, vocal notes.

You can set aside, yet not ignore

As souls in flight
dance to the other side  

Of who we truly are…
among the stars.  

Not by chance
our steps fly  

To other dimensions
 to find ourselves  

A meeting place…

In other worlds
in time


Scheme XA XB AX CD ED AF G B XH X X I EE J BK XX JL M X NN IA FB L XXN XX NX BX LO XXP B Q X R R H X BXX XX AX KX XG B XX X X XO XX PQ GX X CM
Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 01011 01000100 101011 1100100100 1001100 010010101 10011 11000101 11100 101001 10101 10110100 1010010 1010101000 01010 011010 1000111 1010101 1101001 10110010 110 10111 101100100 01110 010011 10100110 10101010001001 110110111 10101111010110100101 101010111 101011011 111101 1101 10011001 10110 0101000 100101 11101 00010 110001 10011 11101 1001 1101 1011101011 1101111 101010 11110111 101 110110110 1 11011111 01001101111 111110101 101100111 11111111 11010100 101010101 0111000100 11111101 101111 110111 011111001 100101001 110001 101110 101101 10101011 10111010 1101001000 1010 11010 101101 111011101 1101 110101 111101 0101 111 1011 110010 11001 0101 0101 01
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,622
Words 517
Sentences 10
Stanzas 51
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2
Lines Amount 85
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 37
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Written on 2018

Submitted by Charles2 on August 20, 2023

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