Analysis of Be be

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



You give
what no other can provide.

Fit perfectly
into every empty space

Within the essence
of everything we share

Seeds of inspiration planted
Between each molecule,
wave, and particle Of my being.

Research in an instant
My entire history…

Within a gesture
As simple as a kiss.

You send me
on a journey to your love
And back...

Fulfilling me in every way…

More-so than i have ever known

Quenching
all the emptiness
i have ever felt.

As You fill me
with your essence

In tides of deep emotion,
free of foolish pride

i feel you
to the utmost depths inside.

You feed me
everything but lies.

You thrill me
with such intensity and drive.

Exciting me so much
Leaving me
no place to hide,

On this tidal wave
Of US

Where now i ride

Copyright ©2023 CEF2


Scheme AB CX DX XXE XC XX CXX X X EFX CD XB XB CX CX XCB XF B A
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1110101 1100 01100101 01010 11011 1101010 01110 101001110 010110 1010100 01010 110101 111 1010111 01 010101001 11111101 10 10100 11101 1111 1110 0111010 11101 111 101101 111 1011 111 11010001 010111 101 1111 11101 11 1111 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 805
Words 193
Sentences 9
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 3, 1, 1, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 31
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Written on 2018

Submitted by Charles2 on August 25, 2023

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