Analysis of Falling teardrops

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



Creating ripples
of the fluidic fabric
in our lives

Rhythms of vibrations
of all what we aspire

Every phase of our lives
given reason if we are so, inspired

we find ourselves

Perfecting our form for the entry point
For the perfect swan dive,

just shy of the arc of the moment
in those who pause to reflect

The place where our futures
start awakening within

their embryonic skin

Then, sensing the current
of the emotion

Upon the rise and ebb
of universal tides at flow

As intuitions lead us
to one another

to a point
Where they coincide

otherwise, passion for conflict,
will merge and collide

making timing shift

A little too far left or right
and leave us only watching

our lost futures as they slip on by

While we dream away
half alive

The echoes of intention
what remnants of our passions

lost in our suspension of time, in life
As fluidic echoes of teardrops, disconnect

Fall through empty spaces,
never quite erasing traces of mistakes,

old/new/ones we’ve yet to make

Ones spanning from the cradle to the grave,

between molecules broken free
from the wall of silence which divide us

from our loving dreams

While trapped behind
time spent alone

Held within the shadows
of our separate shells

In hopes that we’ll succeed,
whenever we find the will

To germinate the seeds
for our fortunes

Once planted, lovingly
to freely grow

And the means
to transcend the urge

To remain true to our feelings,
get used

Breaking free
of our pattern
of persistent failures

Learning to get more comfortable
with cheating fate

Rather than
just to be resigned
to following

The past pathways of misery,

Find somewhere in our spirit-will
the strength To break

from the pattern of past mistakes
to overcome our weeping trails of woes

Swing our parties do si do.
No longer satisfied with the consolation prize

Feel free to experience love

Let the natural rhythm in our lives

Once again, our true spirit’s flow

Provide for our survival

Together once, and forever

As i believe was always meant to be
Without either one of us losing pride

Having sold our souls
In compromise

Copyright@2023 Charles E Fields2


Scheme XXA BX AX X CD EF GH H EI XJ KL CM XM X XN X XD IB XF XO P X QK X RX SX XT XB QJ XX XX QXG UX XRN Q TP OS XV X A J U L QM XV X
Poetic Form
Metre 01010 10110 0101 101010 111101 10011101 10101111010 11001 01010110101 100111 111011010 0111101 0111010 1010001 10101 110010 10010 010101 1010111 1111 11010 101 1101 1010110 11001 10101 01011111 0111010 1011011111 11101 101 0101010 11011010 10100101101 111011001 111010 10101010101 1111111 1101010101 0110101 1011101011 110101 1101 1101 10101 110101 011101 0101101 11001 11010 110100 1101 001 10101 101111010 11 101 11010 101010 101111000 1101 101 11101 1100 0111100 11010101 0111 10101101 1101010111 11010111 11010100101 11101001 10100100101 101101101 01110010 01010010 110111111 0110111101 101101 010 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,237
Words 477
Sentences 3
Stanzas 46
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 3, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 81
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 37
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Written on 2008

Submitted by Charles2 on August 25, 2023

Modified by Charles2 on August 25, 2023

2:23 min read
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