Analysis of Why here?

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



We’d been procreated
in the exchange

Between two sets of legs
Some eggs and a shot of super goo

Without regard to the inherent obsession
The result/a need of a thing called love

punctuated by the words, “I do”  

Picking up the slack every day since creation
called us to be

in answer to this mystery of what the Hell for

how could anyone of us ignore
 the challenge of the next chapter of the book of life

even when living from one moment to the next
any moment our present could become our past

trapped in the depth of a new reality crossing
beneath a cloak of invisibility in the guise of death

the complete disappearance of a will to exist?
after being dressed for the hereafter

moving on to a more permanent place
All the while the physical universe closes behind you

its connection erased. Where no one can find you

No more of life’s
chain reactions and distractions
to blind you

no more of love’s gifts
 to remind you

why we are here?

As the tides turn
incense burns

Gregorian chants
Merge with background noise

obscuring the scene
as the last vision of life becomes
Something
somewhat A dream

of past scenes
between you
and the recently departed
 spirit-soul

now seen in rear-view mirror
of everybody else’s past

the afterlife is another role
as a soul changes phase

transporting spirit-soul
from one dimension

to the next   

Copyright ©2023 CEF2


Scheme AX XB CD B CX E EX FG HX XI XB B XXB XB X XX XX XXHX XBAJ IG JX JC F D
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 0001 011111 110011101 010110010010 0010110111 10010111 1010110011010 1111 0101110011011 11101101 0101011010111 101101110101 10101010101101 10011011010 010110010000111 001010101101 1010110010 1011011001 10101001010011 101001111111 1111 10100010 111 11111 1011 1111 1011 011 01001 1111 01001 101101101 10 1101 111 011 00100010 101 1101110 1100101 01010101 101101 010101 11010 101 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,422
Words 296
Sentences 4
Stanzas 24
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 3, 2, 1, 2, 2, 4, 4, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 47
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Written on 2022

Submitted by Charles2 on August 25, 2023

Modified by Charles2 on December 24, 2023

1:28 min read
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