Analysis of Why here?
Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)
We’d been procreated
in the exchange
Between two sets of legs
Some eggs and a shot of super goo
Without regard to the inherent obsession
The result/a need of a thing called love
punctuated by the words, “I do”
Picking up the slack every day since creation
called us to be
in answer to this mystery of what the Hell for
how could anyone of us ignore
the challenge of the next chapter of the book of life
even when living from one moment to the next
any moment our present could become our past
trapped in the depth of a new reality crossing
beneath a cloak of invisibility in the guise of death
the complete disappearance of a will to exist?
after being dressed for the hereafter
moving on to a more permanent place
All the while the physical universe closes behind you
its connection erased. Where no one can find you
No more of life’s
chain reactions and distractions
to blind you
no more of love’s gifts
to remind you
why we are here?
As the tides turn
incense burns
Gregorian chants
Merge with background noise
obscuring the scene
as the last vision of life becomes
Something
somewhat A dream
of past scenes
between you
and the recently departed
spirit-soul
now seen in rear-view mirror
of everybody else’s past
the afterlife is another role
as a soul changes phase
transporting spirit-soul
from one dimension
to the next
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111010 0001 011111 110011101 010110010010 0010110111 10010111 1010110011010 1111 0101110011011 11101101 0101011010111 101101110101 10101010101101 10011011010 010110010000111 001010101101 1010110010 1011011001 10101001010011 101001111111 1111 10100010 111 11111 1011 1111 1011 011 01001 1111 01001 101101101 10 1101 111 011 00100010 101 1101110 1100101 01010101 101101 010101 11010 101 101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,422 |
Words | 296 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 24 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 3, 2, 1, 2, 2, 4, 4, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 47 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 45 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 10 |
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