Analysis of Will 2/be
Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)
Winds striking still waters mirror sparkling starlight
Standing out against darkness
casting visceral impressions as vivid colorful sparks
engraved somewhere in our inner consciousness moving in waves flowing on into the night
Offering suggestions of spirit souls
leaping over the horizons in visions of insights
eternally grounded in the moment
Rising from dimensions beyond this,
cast adrift in the mists
treasures from the nether world
Free to all blessed with the gift
of discernment
Gems sent from our ancestral protectors
A care package
From those whose love for us
Is forever unwavering and pure
In effort to connect to transfer ideas
concepts collected across dimensions
Beyond this space and time
permitting the effect
of further expansions
within our minds
as we’re inclined
to perfect the cure internally
For future generations,
alert them to the dangers
That we may endure
calamity we must face
Under uncertainty that the present
Will fail to reflect our grasp
of our future inheritance
in fear of a repeat of past mistakes
Easy to relate in effort to protect
Our ancient dreams
Seen from the living truth,
a vantage point aligned
realized vantage points as kings and queens
Futures as they come,
fertile ideals we learn to live by
in faithful striving by just being real
If not too late to be anointed
born of love between the one
chosen to the working sense ability
To get it done
And the dream of the willing heart
Willing to keep it real
Instead of falling off task,
Distracted by the many
lost to the false pride,
A stupidity reserved for faux royalty
With ripples in effect
which seize our focus
Lead us to slaughter
stripped of will to resist
Mesmerized by cheap thrills
a willingness to kiss The asp
Of cheap idols False gods (if you will)
A circumstantial moment of bliss
to block the sense ability
to recognize the futility
Off track diversions
Bind our common sense
Such that we crash dive into seas of misery
but for a tiny spark
from the heart of those
who continue to receive the wave of creation
having the gift to catch the drift,
see past the myth
sensing something is amiss
Despite all cost,
to continue to believe
The message planted,
within our souls’ seed
Creating from the all
the method to proceed
To fuse together
connect souls in flight
As liquid points of light
Dancing in and out of shadows,
silhouettes on the walls
Crossing the threshold
of new dimensions
As shooting stars
leap from the heavens,
Adrift from obscure points of eternity…
Joining voices as if,
the universe has spoken
And whispers of the spirit pools
opening a flurry of new dimensions,
became aligned
falling gently in formation
creating signs,
in accordance with the life design
which was never preordained
only, foretold
to call forth
Forces of creation
as the will 2 be
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Scheme | A BX A XX CD XX EC F XB GX HX IHX JK HF GX CL XX IX XJ XX XM NO KO XM XK XK IB PX X LX DK KH XK XQ OE XD XR NS XS PA AQ XT HX HK XO XH JOX XX TX OK R |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11011010101 1010110 101000101101001 0110101010010011010101 1000101101 1010001001011 0100100010 101010011 101001 1010101 1111101 1010 11110010010 0110 111111 1010010001 010101101010 1001001010 011101 010001 110010 01101 1001 101010100 110010 0111010 11101 0100111 1001001010 11101101 110100100 0110011101 10101010101 10101 110101 010101 101011101 10111 100111111 0101011101 111111010 1110101 10101010100 1111 00110101 101111 0111011 0101010 11011 001000111100 110001 111010 11110 111101 10111 01001101 111011111 00101011 11010100 11000100 11010 110101 111110111100 110101 10111 1010101011010 10011101 1101 1010101 0111 1010101 01010 011011 010101 010101 11010 01101 110111 1000111 01101 1001 11010 1101 11010 01101110100 101011 010110 01010101 10001011010 0101 10100010 0101 001010101 111001 1001 111 101010 1011 101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 2,970 |
Words | 621 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 51 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 99 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 45 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 9 |
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