Analysis of Will 2/be



Winds striking still waters mirror sparkling starlight

Standing out against darkness
casting visceral impressions as vivid colorful sparks

engraved somewhere in our inner consciousness moving in waves flowing on into the night

Offering suggestions of spirit souls
leaping over the horizons in visions of insights

eternally grounded in the moment  
Rising from dimensions beyond this,

cast adrift in the mists
treasures from the nether world

Free to all blessed with the gift
of discernment

Gems sent from our ancestral protectors  

A care package
From those whose love for us

Is forever unwavering and pure
In effort to connect to transfer ideas

concepts collected across dimensions
Beyond this space and time

permitting the effect
of further expansions
within our minds

as we’re inclined
to perfect the cure internally

For future generations,
alert them to the dangers

That we may endure
calamity we must face

Under uncertainty that the present
Will fail to reflect our grasp

of our future inheritance
in fear of a repeat of past mistakes

Easy to relate in effort to protect
Our ancient dreams

Seen from the living truth,
a vantage point aligned

realized vantage points as kings and queens
Futures as they come,

fertile ideals we learn to live by
 in faithful striving by just being real

If not too late to be anointed
born of love between the one

chosen to the working sense ability
To get it done

And the dream of the willing heart
Willing to keep it real

Instead of falling off task,
Distracted by the many

lost to the false pride,  
A stupidity reserved for faux royalty

With ripples in effect
which seize our focus

Lead us to slaughter
stripped of will to resist

Mesmerized by cheap thrills

a willingness to kiss The asp
Of cheap idols False gods (if you will)

A circumstantial moment of bliss
to block the sense ability

to recognize the futility
Off track diversions

Bind our common sense
Such that we crash dive into seas of misery

but for a tiny spark
from the heart of those

who continue to receive the wave of creation
having the gift to catch the drift,

see past the myth
sensing something is amiss

Despite all cost,
to continue to believe

The message planted,
within our souls’ seed

Creating from the all
the method to proceed

To fuse together
connect souls in flight

As liquid points of light
Dancing in and out of shadows,

silhouettes on the walls
Crossing the threshold

of new dimensions
As shooting stars

leap from the heavens,
Adrift from obscure points of eternity…

Joining voices as if,
the universe has spoken

And whispers of the spirit pools
opening a flurry of new dimensions,

became aligned  
falling gently in formation
creating signs,

in accordance with the life design
which was never preordained

only, foretold
to call forth

Forces of creation
as the will 2 be

Copyright ©2023 CEF2


Scheme A BX A XX CD XX EC F XB GX HX IHX JK HF GX CL XX IX XJ XX XM NO KO XM XK XK IB PX X LX DK KH XK XQ OE XD XR NS XS PA AQ XT HX HK XO XH JOX XX TX OK R
Poetic Form
Metre 11011010101 1010110 101000101101001 0110101010010011010101 1000101101 1010001001011 0100100010 101010011 101001 1010101 1111101 1010 11110010010 0110 111111 1010010001 010101101010 1001001010 011101 010001 110010 01101 1001 101010100 110010 0111010 11101 0100111 1001001010 11101101 110100100 0110011101 10101010101 10101 110101 010101 101011101 10111 100111111 0101011101 111111010 1110101 10101010100 1111 00110101 101111 0111011 0101010 11011 001000111100 110001 111010 11110 111101 10111 01001101 111011111 00101011 11010100 11000100 11010 110101 111110111100 110101 10111 1010101011010 10011101 1101 1010101 0111 1010101 01010 011011 010101 010101 11010 01101 110111 1000111 01101 1001 11010 1101 11010 01101110100 101011 010110 01010101 10001011010 0101 10100010 0101 001010101 111001 1001 111 101010 1011 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,970
Words 621
Sentences 1
Stanzas 51
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 99
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Written on 2020

Submitted by Charles2 on August 25, 2023

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