Analysis of Word raps



                                                   
Stop living a lie open your eyes
Let the truth be revealed
there is no reason to hide

The true wealth the creator
has provided us with which to start
Resides hidden deep inside our minds
not only your heart

When I say you are a jewel
do you know what I mean?
Pretending that you are peasant
when you are really a king or a queen

Take special care and show appreciation
 to everyone who is truly special to you
Even though they may not realize
the reasons for the things that you do

Why does it seem this lesson
 in life is so hard?
By cheating yourself
out of life’s greatest reward

When it comes to your life’s happiness
you are in charge
It never should be taken
as a part-time job

When you do what comes naturally
it will make you feel good
Knowing that you
are doing what you should

Try to correct those
whom you love and care for their good
If you care enough to be a friend
then surely you would

The truth will come to be
a joy just because it’s true
When you believe in yourself,
then others truly will believe in you too

When you wrongly
abuse one of your friends
Then you must quickly correct your mistake
and seek to make amends

When you find someone who
you believe you love and need
Remember the creator
has given all of us the seed

Seek out the one
who needs your love to succeed
And if they are truly grateful
see the truth as the reward that you receive

Will be worth every effort that you gave it
(if that’s what you believe)
So that you can better focus
the full strength your life’s energies

Above all others
there is one hard fast rule
You must believe in yourself
and don’t be some bodies lifetime fool

And when you take
a good look at your life
Trying to find that special
kindly person who you really like

That’s willing to become second
and you feel likewise
Just don’t lose the morals
that are important and wise

And helpful when it comes
to the people most special in our eyes
Who sacrifice aid, protect their minds
and make them realize

If you truly are that person’s
reflection inside
Say that prayer to make room in your heart
should you decide

The creator may decide you are truly worthy
if you can forget your pride
For that someone to be the companion
always at your side

If you sincerely desire companionship
you will make the best of lovers
With tenderness and trust that only the creator
can provide for one another

Can you imagine a person who you love
to watch everything you do?
Who builds their world around you,
being so happy just to have found you?

A person who welcomes happiness
with a profound sense of gratitude
A person who respects you and is not rude, v
icious or having a nasty attitude

A person who will be happy
to satisfy you and provide
People who will make you
feel happy just to be alive

Close your eyes and let
the magic work for you
Make what you desire
in others, what you do

Understanding that we
all must compromise
So that we can be happy
for the rest of our lives

It can if you give it the chance
for it to succeed
Be yourself and watch
the creator’s work proceed

Love is the gift of our sacrifice
for others to achieve
If a loving partner is what you desire
 that’s what you should be

If great sex is the reward
you expect to receive
To make a better husband or a wife
you’d better grieve

Then you must have a great healing,
loving relationship with your only
No one wants to grow old
feeling sad and lonely

Then it makes you feel
really good to satisfy their needs
When it’s a mutual feeing
then you will have the seed

For what others desire for all their lives
is not difficult to achieve
Just be that special someone
and it will be evident that you believe

People who are your true friends
will treat you like family
They will be generous
when you are genuinely in need

Beware of the people who would like
to call themselves your friends
Only serving to further self interests
when it satisfies their ends

But you are lying to yourself
if you live above your means
Cheating and stealing
from others is obscene

I’m not talking about the folks
who must struggle just stay alive
For the creator has given us plenty
that we may help each other to survive

We are all children to the creator;
if I must, I will be an instigator
We all must have a strong will to share
if we expect to become, something greater

Being cruel and hateful
can only hasten the end of our lives
When you believe in meaningful life
you will support no strife

Things appear to be what they are not;
they are not always what they seem
Happiness should not ever be,
just somebody else’s dream

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Poetic Form
Metre 110011011 101101 1111011 0110010 101011111 0110101101 11011 11111010 111111 01011110 1111001101 1101010010 11011101011 10111110 010101111 1111110 01111 11001 1111001 111111100 1101 1101110 10111 111111000 111111 1011 110111 11011 11101111 111011101 11011 011111 0110111 1101001 11010101011 1110 011111 1111001101 011101 11111 1011101 0100010 11011101 1101 1111101 01111010 10110011101 111100101111 111101 11111010 01111100 01110 111111 1101001 01111011 0111 011111 1011110 101011101 11010110 0111 111010 1101001 010111 10101100101 11010111 01110 11101110 01001 111111011 111 001011111010 1110111 111110010 1111 11010010010 11101110 1100011100010 10111010 11010010111 111011 1111011 1011011111 010110100 10011110 010101101111 111001010 01011110 1101001 101111 11011101 11101 010111 111010 010111 01011 1110 1111110 1011101 11111101 11101 10101 0010101 110111010 110101 101010111010 11111 1111001 101101 1101010101 1101 11110110 100101110 111111 101010 11111 10111011 1101001 111101 11100101111 11100101 111101 01111001101 1011111 1111100 111100 111100001 011010111 110111 1010110110 111011 11110101 1110111 10010 110101 11100101 11101101 10010110110 1111110101 1111010010 1111111100 111101111 11011011010 1010010 11010011101 110101001 110111 101111111 1111111 10011101 110101 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 4,739
Words 983
Sentences 5
Stanzas 39
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 152
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Written on August 13, 2006

Submitted by Charles2 on August 26, 2023

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