Analysis of Tin roof

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



Musical tap dance raindrops falling...
when striking the roof top

i kind of like it (Hope it never stops)

Way back, yesterdays
when people’s homes were hand made.

All were built pre-paid
neighbors, always there

people who cared enough to share
because life was always hard

families of neighbors would understand
the pains of life's demands.

Those who would be there to help each other
make do one love for each truth

we'd come together
after the days work was done
share love and have fun.

Hard work, like simple truth
will never go out of style.

whether, by city block,
Or country mile...  

Copyright ©2023 CEF2


Scheme XX X XA AB BX XX CD CEE DF XF X
Poetic Form
Metre 10011110 110011 1111111101 1110 1101011 10111 1011 10110111 011111 100110101 011101 1111111110 1111111 11010 1001111 11011 111101 1101111 101101 1101 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 643
Words 134
Sentences 7
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 44
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by Charles2 on September 02, 2023

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