Analysis of We ...particles

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



As i peer intensely
into the all...

knowing i am damn near
blind

if not, by the infinite
potentiality

lost, as if by
chance

yet, as
i believe

a possibility
becomes
an awakening

should i venture to take a step
beyond belief

beyond knowing
of what i perceive

it is to be
never knowing,
for sure

where i have come from?

as to what this is?

or where, i am...
?

Just
living from this moment
to the next

upon this wave
where now
i ride,

rising, falling...
endless as the rhythms
on the seas...

yet, as i sense you near me

believing
that you hear my heartbeat
from within

you can sense my presence
written in these words

almost as if you feel the wind

hearing, of all a oneness
in ...all our
eternal callings

by our hearts
of souls,

we are particles...
of dimensions beyond,

drawn from within
and above...

bound,
by our relationships

and what we imagine
that we feel...

when we feel
ourselves...

in love with life

and others with us
riding upon this wave
of time-space
we're on

swept by the tide
beyond mere reason
chance or circumstance

we who have survived

even though,
we may not know it...

surrounded by some
whose prayers
surround us,

someone who dares
even without due cause

to want to go there
for us...

even when we
cast them aside

do not share...
their view

and cares more about us
than we, ourselves
can...

thus even when we
fail to recognize...

we are always
immersed ...in


Scheme AX XB XB XC XD AEF XX FD AFX G X X XXX HXI FEX A FXJ XX B KXC XX XX JX XX LM MN X KHXX ILC X XX GOK OX PK AI PX KNX AX XJ
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 0101 101111 1 1110100 1 1111 1 11 101 00100 01 10100 11101101 0101 0110 11101 1111 1010 11 11111 11111 1111 1 1 101110 101 0111 11 11 1010 101010 101 1111111 010 11111 101 111110 10011 1111101 1011010 0110 0101 1101 11 11100 101001 1101 001 1 110010 011010 111 111 001 0111 01011 100111 111 11 1101 01110 1110 11101 101 11111 01011 11 011 111 100111 11111 11 1011 1101 111 11 011011 11001 1 11011 1110 111 010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,454
Words 332
Sentences 20
Stanzas 39
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 3, 1, 1, 2, 3, 3, 3, 1, 3, 2, 1, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 4, 3, 1, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2
Lines Amount 84
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Submitted by Charles2 on September 02, 2023

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