Analysis of Twilight
Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)
As the suns path escapes our sight
Beyond the curvature of the Earth
Becomes invisible
Being lost to new horizons
Between …night and day
At times filtered or obscured by clouds
When the stars come out to play
When children’s prayers make their rounds
Our inner focus Changed In ways profound
Though not in ways So easy for us to explain
Perhaps some magic potion
Discovered by accident
By the ancients
When dinosaurs were still around
(As if that were possible)
More-so, if our pre-versions
of what we’ve to come to be
Found some advantage
In such course of choice
The rest being lost to history
But as your local astrophysicist
Could tell …temperature inversions
Which occur as the sun drops
Beneath the horizon
Reversing the torrent of heat flow
…as it moves to the other side of view
Cooling the air …
bringing the animals
To another stage
Some come out …some go
Taking to safer ground
Predators on the night
watch Patiently attentive …
wait For the young and foolish
To present themselves to a certain fate
While on Heavens door
Unnoticed seasons begin a change
taking place …
winds pouring
Opening a window to space
Let starlight …gently enter
Performing a ballet
As the waning light Quickly fades
The sunset drops fading into obscurity
Our attentions turn Pivot in place…
Our minds refocus …
begin to shift
To drift beyond Our being…
Allow our dreams
To take us Over land and sea
Restlessly exploring
where It ought to be …
leading to Life journeys
Not yet recognized
Much less …our families
Must be prepared to
Brought with us… Our minds lift moods
On making observations
Of the moons rising
Over the horizon
Looming larger than life
Before taking center stage
Then again, as our awareness
of the night world comes
Our senses change An inner gear engages
Amplifies
The contrast By abstraction
Creating an exaggeration
World of fantasy…
perhaps of terror
When fear is near our hearts
Our Muffled heartbeats
As if possessed
By some machine
To make shallow …our breaths
Slam our hearts madly
Against our chest cavities
Tears …find
their way home
When we face our demons
And send them home…
Let them depart, now
Take deep breaths
Now surrounded
By peace and calm
Unwinding
our consciousness
We feel inclined
to soar Once more
Dream magic in flight
Above the clouds
To become at night
what we are not by day
our starships play
Within our minds
Take us there
And then some
We redirect time Light
as well as sound
Master each particle
Suspended in the hourglass
Run our life backwards
Review our former choices
Armed with inner voices
Forces we turn to Explain things
Greater than Our minds Grasp
Might Otherwise Be led to Entertain
Thus we become Greater communicators
With our inner selves
Taking the tools We were born to use
Off from quiet places They were stored
Held in suspension For us to use
Further in time Now as we pour
thoughts Back into the well of souls
We take our cup
Filling it with new found vision
Redirecting energies
Rerouting our decisions
And go on
Reborn to tend to
Our life affairs
Give closer focus
To the near and dear…
Pay more attention
To the common ground
What’s that coming! …
it’s the next thing
We once feared …
yet now, when
darkness Fades
to light
We look around
And
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Metre | 101101101 010100101 010100 10111010 01101 111010111 1011111 1101111 10101010101 110111011101 0111010 0101100 1010 1100101 1110100 11110110 1111111 11010 01111 011011100 111100100 111001 1011011 010010 010010111 1111010111 1001 100100 10101 11111 101101 100101 1100010 1101010 1100110101 11101 010100101 101 110 10001011 111010 010001 10101101 01110010100 1001011001 101010 0111 11011010 01101 11110101 100010 11111 101110 1110 1110100 11011 11110111 110010 10110 100010 101011 0110101 101110010 10111 101011101010 10 0101010 01010010 11100 01110 1111101 10101 1101 1101 1110101 110110 01101100 11 111 1111010 0111 11011 111 1010 1101 010 10100 1101 1111 11001 0101 10111 111111 1011 01101 111 011 10111 1111 101100 0100010 110110 1101010 111010 10111011 1011011 11011101 11011001000 110101 100110111 111010101 100101111 10011111 11010111 11101 10111110 010100 01010010 011 11111 10101 11010 10101 11010 10101 0110 1011 111 111 101 11 1101 0 101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 3,480 |
Words | 757 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 68 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 134 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 38 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 8 |
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