Analysis of Everyone's Fight



Dancing with my emotions
While cradling my heart.
Like a tidal wave from the ocean
When did this all start.

Wounds that seem to never heal
But no one sees what I feel.
Laugh it up and smile big
Hide the hurt that they all did.

Memories that do me wrong
To persevere will take too long.
If I go or if I stay
It matters none at end of day.

There is no right
There is no wrong
Only perceptions
Ugly song.

You fooled me once
You fooled me twice.
Then you wonder
Why I only act nice.

Give it time
You'll wear me down..
I try so hard
To stand my ground.

My will is slipping
My mind grows weak
But HURRY! HURRY!
You unstable sheep!!

Walk, then run
But do not speak!
A life in shambles
Past it's peak.

I love to laugh
But I hate to cry
DON'T LOOK AT ME!!!!
Just pass on by.

Give me a minute
To gather my thoughts
I'm under duress
Yet you continue to press.

Awaken my beauty
You're complete and all done
You gave it your all
And had a good run...


Scheme ABCB DDXX EEFF XEAE XGXG XXXX XHIX CHXH XJIJ XXKK ICXC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (64%)
Metre 1011010 110011 101011010 11111 1111101 1111111 111011 1011111 1001111 10011111 1111111 11011111 1111 1111 10010 101 1111 1111 1110 111011 111 1111 1111 1111 11110 1111 11010 10101 111 1111 01010 111 1111 11111 1111 1111 11010 11011 11010 1101011 010110 101011 11111 01011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 949
Words 223
Sentences 20
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted by rnicholew03 on August 23, 2023

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