Analysis of Ghetto Vibe



The air that I breathe makes me feel free
I cant be who you want me to be
That's just is not me and I cant lose myself trying to be someone else
My am my own person  and i am not going to give in to no man
Once in my life was enough
And i cant give in to that stuff
You got me fuck up and i told you once was enough
We don't vibe like that so you shouldn't expect it from me
If you did then you got the game fuck up
Twisted and Confused i never will be
Trust me you don't know nothing about me
I let you see what I want you to see
When you think its about you
Just sit back because i will disappear on you
Good relationship are hard to find
And I know what Im looking for when i enter mines
With you i am waisting my time
So get me out your mind
Because trust me I will be hard to find like a drop of a dime
Now i got you crying and looking all weak
And somebody like you will never be with me


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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 896
Words 202
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 689
Words per stanza (avg) 200

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A poem about my feelings

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Written on June 23, 2023

Submitted by tammyterrellalways23 on August 21, 2023

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Tammy Terrell-Johnson

A college student , a mother of four girls and I'm from Shreveport,La more…

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