Analysis of Lese-Majesty

Alan Scott 1953 (Southampton)



Lord,
that I can see,
that I am able  
to receive Your glory,
the wonder of You,
is the miracle of life.

But Lord,
what would You have
me do,
if I had
to give
myself to You?

Fisher of men?
There is no other.
Baited to the hook of words
Your seed holds worlds
before my eyes.
I nibble

but still
refuse to bite:
fearing all
of that pellucid line, trawling
all of the fathoms
that assure me

of the obscure
freedoms that are mine.
And the bleached sunlight,
treading those familiar currents,
surfaces a soothing delirium
of play that glazes my sight.

Here,
there is an incessant
ebb and flow (continual highs
and lows)
that combs my mind,
manicures the endings of my nerves.

I fear the hands,
brutalized and bloodied,
that would coax me
to the land
that You are king of.
I fear the pain

of a broken heart,
courteous and noble,
that would gentle
my spirit to part
with its natatorium -
Lord,

could I ever possibly forswear
such rich,
waterless,
oxygenated air?


Scheme Abcbdx axdxxd xxxxec xfxxxb xxfxgf xxexxx xxbxxx hcchgA ixbi
Poetic Form
Metre 1 1111 11110 101110 01011 1010011 11 1111 11 111 11 111 1011 11110 1010111 1111 0111 110 11 0111 101 11111 11010 1011 1001 10111 0011 10101010 1000100100 1111011 1 111010 10101001 01 1111 1010111 1101 10010 1111 101 11111 1101 10101 100010 1110 11011 111 1 111010001 11 1 10001
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 977
Words 219
Sentences 10
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 4
Lines Amount 52
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Written on 1983

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Alan Scott

Raised in a number of parts of the world - Trinidad (West Indies) Lake District in England and finally South Africa. Writing has always been a passion - English was one of my majors at university and was designed for a career in journalism and novel writing before life got in the way. I ended up as a corporate executive in the manufacturing industry. I stopped writing poems about 20-25 years ago and now devote my spare time to writing screenplays - but the poetry in me still infuses my prose unabated. more…

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