Analysis of Maybe

Harry C. Craft III 1959 (Phoenix, Arizona)



I wish I were somebody
that all the world could see
and I was the man
everyone expects me to be

I wish my soul was pure
like that of an angel
and I could find a cure
for all the world’s sickness

I wish I could wake from this nightmare
to be in a perfect world
where everyone was my friend
and I could instill love
in each and everyone

Maybe I could spread peace
like mayonnaise on a slice of bread
and I could breathe life
into the dead

Maybe I could pull the stars
from the night sky
and make your dark days bright
maybe, just maybe,
I could be your eternal light


Scheme AAXA BXBX XXXXX XCXC XXDAD
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 110111 01101 1001111 111111 111110 011101 110110 11111111 1100011 110111 011011 01010 101111 11010111 01111 0101 1011101 1011 011111 10110 11110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 570
Words 121
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4, 5
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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Harry C. Craft III

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