Analysis of Wasted



*Starts with a shot and a drink, to set the mood just right!

*Another shot, another drink followed by a bowl of weed & a cigarette thats the my routine at night!

*Wasted cause you dont wanna show emotions or any weakness!

*Numbing all the sad feelings, masked with a smile in her own uniqueness!

*Loss is apart of life that we know, getting closer to the light!

*Another shot, another drink, more smoke just wanna feel closer to you & keep up this fight!

*Anything to take this pain away, another shot, drink, & more smoke the darkness is following me forever!

*Some days i can find the light at the end of the darkness, somedays seems darker follows me where i go!

*Wasted to try to ignore the darkness, more drinks an music going loudly, another cigarette and a bowl to go with this flow!

*Life is to short and anything can happen, one minute everything can be completely alright, and the next you get that call that family passed away!

*Another shot, another drink, another round to toast the dead, honoring memories of those we've lost, red dirt road is the song i play!

*Budwiser please and a shot jack too, make it 2 one shot for me and the second one is for you!

*Wasted because it was your favorite thing to do, playing a game of darts you beat me again another round or two!

*Doing this because in a way, makes me feel closer to you, Brother i miss you every damn day, when will this pain subside, i can barely get through!


Scheme A A B B A A X C C D D E E E
Poetic Form
Metre 1101001110111 0101010110101110011010111 1011110101011010 10101101101001010 1101111111010101 0101010111110110111111 10111101010111101011001010 111110110110101110101111 10111010101111010100100100111111 11110101101101011010100111111100101 0101010101011101100100111111110111 110011111111100101111 100111110011110011111101010111 1010100111110111011110011111101111011
Characters 1,454
Words 298
Sentences 15
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 79
Words per line (avg) 19
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

Drinking to the point where you think you can see family members that have passed!

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Written on December 07, 2022

Submitted by briannafranklin160 on August 27, 2023

1:29 min read
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Brianna Franklin

Everyones got a past and for me the best way to let things go is my poetry. more…

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